by Bobby C.
Preface: My glosa is of the song Jay Walking Backwards by The Number Twelve Looks Like You. The lyrics are written about a homeless man that was hit by a car in a busy city. I chose this song because I admire their lyricist’s attitude for writing lyrics about witnessing that event rather than just dismissing it like everyone else must have. The song speaks of human rights, and the homeless man’s right to life, and his right to be remembered.
I workshopped my glosa and was told that the imagery created in the students’ minds was potent, but the transition from the first stanza into the second was jagged and gave an unclear meaning.
I decided not to change anything about it because I felt that the poem worked well divided into sections, each about a separate part of the incident. The first the city itself, the second the people’s interaction with the city, and the third the actual accident and its aftermath.
My Glosa:
Did you know that pedestrians always have the right of way?
Their lives came together as they danced in the street,
It’s really unexpected how some people meet.
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The city expands and contracts as it breathes,
Lazily indulging cacophonies like these.
The people down fluvial one-ways drift,
To the waterfall of morning, while ignoring its cliff.
These streets form a dissonant symphony, so loud,
Become a face of the mass as you squirm in the crowd.
The cars and the faces lit by merciless neon gleam,
Stay focused on the river, keep drinking from the stream.
Twenty-second incidents take you to the birth of day,
Did you know that pedestrians always have the right of way?
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Encounters come and are forgotten inside this neon vein,
We’ve all got the same mission, the same incoherent campaign.
The cabbies all have headphones and watch you as you gawk,
The river is entrancing while you’re dancing on the sidewalk.
Forget those poor gutter souls, left out by life’s current,
Ignore them as they tug your pant-leg, desperate for a cent.
It’s that ignorance that makes a city, that makes it breathe so well,
But when such an accident makes us cry, you really just can’t tell.
So none of us, moving or not, really care while we compete,
Their lives came together as they danced in the street.
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That poor old vagrant who lost a draw of chance,
Felt loved and warm, for just a second, at the ending of his dance.
And for a few moments, like him, they were static,
Laughter died, and night became so climactic.
The verbose sense of friction in a dream without feeling,
Was so real for a second; so really unappealing.
For death was among them as the old man danced with the car,
No one could ignore him as he hit the ground that hard.
And while the current of this river pulls us to sad defeat,
It’s really unexpected how some people meet.